Something's sloshing in Amsterdam... and it's more than just canal water!

A group of friends get together every Friday for a themed cocktail night. Amazing how creative booze can get!

Saturday, March 12, 2011

Poetry in Motion... (Sloshing Motion)

Cocktail Night has COME AND GONE! And we drank quite a few REALLY lovely poems in the process.

This first one was is called 'Frances in Lavender', written by Helen David (my most talented momma!)
This is a WONDERFUL pantoun that also turned out to be a wonderful cocktail-- pretty to look at and with a subtle, flowery kick. Very fragrant!

Frances in Lavender
 
Upon a cloud of lavender she floats
High on heels, aloof and unengaged
Sheltering her Betty Davis eyes
Beneath the wide brim of her lavender hat.
 
High on heels, aloof and unengaged
Avoiding smiles and nods of fellow passengers
Beneath the wide brim of her lavender hat
Violet eyes slide sideways to capture mine.
 
Avoiding smiles and nods of fellow passengers
She stands with stately chip on middle-aged shoulders
Violet eyes slide sideways to capture mine
In challenge to my youthful, curious stare.
 
She stands with stately chip on middle-aged shoulders
Peering o’re lavender walls in stern reproach
In challenge to my youthful curious stare
Why does this middle-aged woman fascinate so?
 
Peering o’re lavender walls in stern reproach
Cool lavender eyes gaze sadly in remembrance
Why does this middle-aged woman fascinate so?
T’would take another forty years to know.
 
Cool lavender eyes gaze sadly in remembrance
Blissful youth once known lived out too quickly
T’would take another 40 years to know
How does the river of youth bleed from a soul.
 
Blissful youth once known lived out too quickly
Young Frances peers beyond those aging walls
And reaches for a face, a memory fading, while
Upon a cloud of lavender she floats.

Frances in Lavender
splash of black vodka (makes it lavender-colored)
2 ounces normal vodka
top with tonic
add ice cubes










The Next drink was taken from a poem a wrote a few years ago-- another pantoun. It's named after a house on Turtleback Road in Marston's Mills Cape Cod, one of the many family homes I lived in, filled with happy memories:


Turtleback

Mint and fizzy like an old-fashioned cocktail
A museum of memories reaching far back
Fanned out and breezy as a swallow’s tail

Potholed and textured, our stories, like brail
Are crooked and crumbling as a chimney stack
Mint and fizzy like an old-fashioned cocktail

Passed on by the cricket and the nightingale
From hearth to treetop to some old almanac
Fanned out and breezy as a swallow’s tail

Our tales, wound tight, like a nautilus or snail
Hidden in a nutshell or a seashell, or a spice rack
Mint and fizzy like an old-fashioned cocktail

Foggy photos of faces, some sunburned, some pale
Not framed in gold plaster and likely to crack
Fanned out and breezy as a swallow’s tail

Remembered, rekindled, our stories, our trail
As rounded and toasted as a turtle’s back
Mint and fizzy like an old-fashioned cocktail
Fanned out and breezy as a swallow’s tail
  


Turtleback
Crush mint leaves in a cocktail shaker
Add ice
2 ounces of gin
1 ounce dry vermouth
1 ounce mojito syrup
Use martini glass
Fill to the rim with seltzer
Add a squeeze of lime
Garnish with a mint leave

The next one is a poem called 'Scrabble' I wrote at a writer's retreat, years ago. The pressure is always on at those kinds of workshops, but I was pleased with the product. 



Scrabble

Children are building a sandcastle with a pink pail
Don’t they know it will be gone before they’ve added the turrets?
Didn’t they see the paw prints of the dog disappear?
And the yellow Frisbee drifting away on the tide?

 I’m playing Scrabble on the sand, in the sun
The pitcher of sangria is already empty
Not even the cubes of apple of the slices of peach are left
And there’s not enough room on the board to spell ‘temporary’.

I’m wondering, worrying about when this will end
The sun’s already slipping behind a row of houses
The moat around the sandcastle has flooded
Now there’s not enough room on the board to spell ‘later’.

Push away the moon
Splash away the tide
Sing a sunny song
I wanted to spell ‘soon’
But I couldn’t decide
Now I’ve waited too long

Will the sunlight, the Scrabble game, or the sandcastle die first?
Tell the children no more castles or chalk pavement pictures
There’s just enough room on the board to spell ‘now’.
Dump the letters in the box and let’s make some new words.

Push away the moon
Splash away the tide
Sing a lullaby
Check the beach for letters
Or a message in a bottle
I need new words

It always ends too soon
When the beach was wide
Like in the afternoon
I didn’t notice the sky
I know I can do better
I need new words




Scrabble
Prepare a pitcher (quart) of red wine with shopped-up fruits and 2 ounces or port & ice cubes)
Leave at least a few hours to chill
Take a tall glass
Add 2 ounces of white rum
Fill the rest of the glass with sangria



This next poem came as a great surprise to me! From an anonymous source no less. And it is a lovely masterpiece of a sonnet!


Crystalline

The warmth of touch seeps deep inside
to melt the frost on soul divine
To show what things within reside
A love with which the soul does shine
but if thy care does not prove true
and thy gaze wander far
the coat of ice shall grow anew
the tender soul shall scar
But scars do fade and ice does thaw
fortresses do fall.
For all things live, this is law
and it does govern all.
A heart turned to ice, if left too long
shall never in life, to another belong.





Crystalline
Fill a tumbler with crushed ice
Add one shot gin
Add a dash of Angostura bitters
Top with seltzer water





And lastly, a poem called 'Kites of the Poem'. This is a sestina I wrote, and was able to recite onstage at a concert by Canadian artist, Ferron. The sestina form is so, so challenging, but also such a hugely awarding exercise when it works out:




The Kites of the Poet

There’s a crowded road that leads to the edge of the city
If you follow it steep, it will end on a hill.
And there time stands still. Except for the man
Who must wheel his barrow where the streets are too narrow
The painters frown when they smell his fish. And the tolling bell
Makes them think of gargoyles and pirates, royals and poets.

Amongst the still-wet canvasses, you will find one poet.
He believes he lost his soul when he came to the city
Sees it drifting like a stray kite beyond the church bell.
There are few things that please him, two things he favors on that hill.
The flock of easels where the streets are most narrow
And the watercolor scenes of Siam by a mustached man.

Paris is too grey and blue for the mustached man.
He mixes cyan and turquoise while reciting poetry.
Few know he dines with the man with the barrow.
They meet and eat fish heads on the Champs Elysées, at the Vie de Cité.
‘An old grey man in a blue chapeau’ he says as they stroll down the hill,
‘That’s what Paris is to me… and the iron noise of the bells’.

In another square, you’ll see a strap of leather. Harness bells
Hanging on the door of a dusty bookseller. And that man,
Monsieur St. Onge, eats oranges, and stares at the hill.
He cranes his Willowy frame, straining to see shapes of painters and poets.
He bought some pastels near a loud carousel in his part of the city.
Now sketching, he’s crouched, like a gargoyle, leaning over his barrow.

A woman in a feathered hat flits past the old book barrow.
She knows she will be late when she hears the clanging of the bells.
Her rendezvous is all the way across the city-
The first time in years she will sit down with a strange man.
At night, she sings in a cabaret on the Rue de Thé. And he’s a painter.
She met him Wednesday painting wrens way up on the hill.

The people up there live in quiet despair way up on the hill
Crowded into cafés and milling through streets that are too narrow.
The painted feels plagued by the blasé gaze of the poet.
The poet feels bored by the spires and the bells.
The fish barrow rolls as the cathedral bell tolls. And the man
With the mustache dreams in turquoise of another city.

The café, the croissant, the steep hill, and the men
Of the city. With paintbrush, notebook, fish head, and barrow
All ache for what the bells can tell, and chase to the heights the drifting kites of the poet. 






The Kites of the Poet
Using a flute glass
1/2 ounce rose liqueur
1/2 once cointreau
Top up with Brut or champagne
And voila! 

Thanks to everyone who braved a foray into poetry this week! But because the event has come and gone doesn't mean you should stop writing! I'll be doing another poetry night again fairly soon!

1 comment:

  1. So nice to see my pantoum in print! An ode to a beautiful lady in lavender. I'm sure Frances is floating on lavendar clouds by now and at peace with her earthly life and angel wings. I loved reading all these great poems and look forward to imbibing their signature drinks!

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